8/30
1. Corrected and reviewed grammar lessons 3 & 4.
2. Peer-reviewed Gladiator writing response online in SS.
3. Peer-reviewed writing response in class with post-it note feedback.
4. Discussed elements of strong response:
- 1st sentence-Did you state the topic of paragraph?
- 2nd sentence-Did you state your reason for banning gladiator battles?
- 3rd sentence-Did you give at least (1) concrete example from the text to support your reason in 2nd sentence?
- 4th sentence-Did you explain how your example(s) support your reason for the ban?
- 5th sentence-Did you conclude the paragraph with closing statement?
- Did you use correct punctuation, spelling, and mechanics?
- Can some of your sentences include compound predicates (from today's grammar lesson?)
- Could you use 1-2 new vocab words from the Gladiator text into your response?
HW-
{*2nd period did not get to this assignment and will finish in class tomorrow*}
- Revise your writing response in your 365 Word account and make (3) changes from your 1st draft to your 2nd draft. PRINT OUT COPY AND BRING TO CLASS.